Tina -- T. Mike Fletcher here, Your stuff is very good. If I were you I wouldn't think for a moment anything theses armchair photographers are telling you. Like to remove the Jesus photo that part of her life! And the door shadow. that too is part of her home. Don't let them tell you what your doing wrong. Ask them to show you what they have done on a recent assigment. Tina in 1962 I got my contract with TIME magazine that lasted until 1990, in 28 years I shot a lot of assigements and a lot of film. I'm semi retired now, and an ex-member of NPPA and a former president of an ASMP chaptere. Let's talk, T. Mike